Kawaii Kaiju

Viability: the game is playable from start to end, with a straightforward progression and a variety of endings. The system is not particularly complicated, but there are a few moments where the player can determine the outcome (particularly at the end), so it is certainly an improvement over the first prototype.

Presentation: The voice acting and character art is compelling, and adds to the already charming expanded script. Oddly enough, adding voice acting instead of background music made the stakes feel more real, even if the game in general is pretty relaxing. The layout remains serviceable, but I am sure could be made more unique and tidy with the proper CSS design. It would also be great to have some fun ending art, but I understand the time limitations. In all, a strong presentation.

Theme: it is charming and sweet, with a good sense of humor and interesting characters.  Adding Millie and Hydra Z was smart because although they are both nice in their own way, their personalities are not just “bent” towards the player. The theme is much stronger now that we have a variety of people that, although are all nice, have different world views and attitudes.

Engagement: Due to the linear structure, the game can be explored after just a few sessions. They are very fun sessions, however, and overall there is a definitive sense of closure to the experience. Time permitting it would be awesome to create a more open structure, where people can explore the island and meet each Kaiju more than once, in different situations.

The voice acting makes this game great! It is very entertaining, funny, and original. There are a few grammatical errors that a quick proof read could fix. Also, some of the options start lowercase while some start uppercase- I think you should stick with an option and keep it consistent. Loved the art, loved the voices, loved the experience!

THIS IS AMAZING!! I love the concept art and I think narrating is your style. Speed Dating is a yes yes!

Love the sense of humor in this. There's a nice variety in the cast of characters, and I like that some end in friendship rather than romance. I also like that unlike most dating sims, you have equal opportunity with each character - having it be speed dating was definitely a good choice. I like that the player character still retains some background, too. It's just the right amount to make what you're saying and doing believable while still being relatable.

I think the formatting could be tweaked a little - the mostly vertical images are kind of awkward on a computer screen. I never fully see the image, even when there's not a lot of text, which is a shame because the art for the characters is really endearing. Maybe extending the background so the whole image is wider, or changing the image size would help?

Overall, a fun and quirky good time. Extra points for the Evangelion reference, and for having a kaiju who signs! ♪(´▽｀)

This is lovely! I love the number of kaiju you're able to meet in this one, along with the amount of dialogue that's been added. X-Droid is still my favorite, I love all of the different colors and expressions he had. I think kaiju asking you also out on a date while you're speed dating helps support your theme that there's someone out there for everyone. Good work!